IF YOU ARE ENGLISH - PLEASE HELP ME QUICKLY?

It's good writing, but that strange boy is totally unintegrated. Can you surgically remove him, since I don't think you can account for him in a mere 19 words? And it doesn't sound like a complete story, but rather a first page of an ongoing narrative. You repeat a couple of words unnecessarily [staggered, staggered, staggering and dreadfully, dreadfully]. It would also be hard to stroll at a hasty pace. You might be able to cut some adjectives and adverbs (example: progressively increasing confusion would do fine as "increasing confusion"). Part of good writing is learning to edit your own work, so I will stop there. Excellent job so far.