Critique the first chapter of my horror novel and tell me if you keep reading?

I've critiqued A LOT of peoples novels on here and this is DEFINITELY the best! I'm only 14 so I'm not really one to say but that was very good and I would definatly going to want to keep reading! I wasn't expecting the magic and now i really wanna know more. I'm not scarred though... but it's a proper book, not a little story!